This week and next, TFE's Poetry Bus will be driven by none other than NanU, the science girl. For this week's prompt, she has asked us to write about something we like that we think others do not like. I've chosen to write about my use of hands, which some may think is archaic in this current era of technology. Below is the poem:
Hands
Turning
weathered pages of a centuries old book,
my fingers touch a piece of history
for this page was once turned by gloved fingertips
of a lady sitting by candlelight on a blue velvet chair
her cotton dress, flowing around covered ankles.
Strumming
the strings of a vibrating harp, melodic echoes, soothe
the mind of my precious dog who lives to protect me
love me, comfort me. It's the least I can do for her.
Kneading
dough that clings to each finger until I apply
one more dash of flour to create
the soft ball that will miraculously rise
to form into the sweet, aromatic sustenance of life:
bread, feeding my family and friends.
Threading
a needle with just the right length and colour
of waxed cotton,
slowly I turn remnant pieces of cloth
into a quilted memory to comfort
through the warmth of artistry and pragmatism.
Digging
into rich, brown soil I plant a seed
water, nurture, protect until one day it grows
into a savory food, the source of my love's smile.
Holding
an extended hand, I feel the presence
of a life force, strength, our fingertips, touching
then brushing the tear from a child's eye
warm today, cold tomorrow
fond memory of the gentleness.
Loving
from hand to heart.
Jeanne I. Lakatos 2011



Your hands are definitely likeable!!! Beautiful poem Jeanne.
ReplyDeleteYou're really nailing these last lines, Jeanne! Beautiful again here. All the way through in fact!
ReplyDeleteLoving from hand to hearet, such a lovely sentiment. Brava!
Ooh well done! I don't do nearly enough with my hands... I do read books, and occasionally I play piano, but I don't bake or sew (anymore anyway).
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, really enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteLovely- hands are so wonderful- you put it together very nicely! Thanks
ReplyDeleteThank you, Helen!
ReplyDeleteThanks, TFE. Pick what you like from my poetic garden for any of your Poetry Bus issues.
Thanks, Dana! Wish I could play piano!
Thank you, Socks!
Izzy, thank you much!
Your meditation on the many creative movements of hands made me smile, Jeanne. I saw each image as you unfolded it, some very familiar to me, some not. It was a joy to read.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Chris. Glad you enjoyed it.
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