Super Moon over Danbury, Connecticut, 06 May, 2012 (That's a tree leaf on the bottom.)

02 July, 2011

Poetry Jam: Rhododendron (Dark Thoughts)

Our Poetry Jam challenge this week is from Ms. Poetikat, and we are to write about the dark aspect of our flora. At a national conference this past May, I chaired a panel on Gaelic Gothic and discovered that gothic in the gruesome sense is not my cup of tea. However, there does exist a balance of positive and negative in life, and in my operetta, Luminescence, I address this through the spirit voice of Anne Sexton and her associated flower, Rhododendron.

Rhododendron: Dark Thoughts
(from my operetta, Luminescence)

From the corner of the garden,
a fierce wind buffets 
branches of the Rhododendron.
Now enters the looming danger 
of love’s despair.

Begonia, Narcissus,
and Southernwood
all bode a feeling of lost love
in the midst of this glorious
locus amoenus.

Anne whispers: 
Rhododendron is my flower’s name,
I bring dark thoughts
into this world of fragrance.
I make the lives of my seed
and the surrounding seeds
suffer as I do.

Man has attached meaning 
to our nature, proclaiming
that we ignore
the pleas of the world
within our hearts, 
so we suffer association
with the human frailties:
egotism, ultimate ruin, evil. 

But here in this garden, I see: 
The beauty in our lives
does surround us,
even in our darkest moments,
even in those isolated
hours of despair.

Jeanne I. Lakatos  2005

13 comments:

  1. Seeing beauty and meaning in the midst of evil and ruin are beautiful themes. Your poem speaks of hope though the feeling of desperation is palpable.

    Thanks for sharing this ~

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  2. A beautiful flower but it kills all around it. There is a delicious darkness to this, Professor.

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  3. Is this actually a part of your operetta, Jeanne? I find this poem intoxicating! It is beautiful and yet it hints at the darkness I wanted people to strive for.
    You're such a talent!

    Kat

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  4. You were following Kat's instructions years before she wrote them! I agree that it's a beautiful poem - it's makes me think of the evil queen in a fairy tale.

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  5. Peter, dark but sad, too, don't you think?
    Kat, Thank you. Yes, I wrote this operetta as a re-write of the French medieval poem, Roman de la Rose. The original is 17,000 lines. Mine is only 30 pages.
    Dana, Thank you! Yes, it could be an evil queen, but I wanted it to be a melancholy plea from Anne Sexton's spirit.

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  6. Your talent knows no bounds ... this is amazing!

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  7. I come to this knowing nothing of Rhododendrons but a bit of Anne Sexton, and I think she'd be pleased.

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  8. Thank you, Helen, for your very kind words.
    Chris, Thank you. It would be grand if she were. Of the 'Beat' poets, I think Anne Sexton is up there with the best. Amazing how she arrived at the world of poetry by means of psychotherapy.

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  9. Awesome and powerful poem. Your imagery is breathtaking. Love it beauty and darkness.


    Melanie

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  10. Thank you so much, Melanie! Have a lovely week!

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  11. Thank you so much, Anna. What a clever username you have!

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