Rhododendron: Dark Thoughts
(from my operetta, Luminescence)
From the corner of the garden,
a fierce wind buffets
branches of the Rhododendron.
Now enters the looming danger
of love’s despair.
Begonia, Narcissus,
and Southernwood
all bode a feeling of lost love
in the midst of this glorious
locus amoenus.
Anne whispers:
Rhododendron is my flower’s name,
I bring dark thoughts
into this world of fragrance.
I make the lives of my seed
and the surrounding seeds
suffer as I do.
Man has attached meaning
to our nature, proclaiming
that we ignore
the pleas of the world
within our hearts,
so we suffer association
with the human frailties:
egotism, ultimate ruin, evil.
But here in this garden, I see:
The beauty in our lives
does surround us,
even in our darkest moments,
even in those isolated
hours of despair.
Jeanne I. Lakatos 2005


Seeing beauty and meaning in the midst of evil and ruin are beautiful themes. Your poem speaks of hope though the feeling of desperation is palpable.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this ~
Thanks, Heaven!
ReplyDeleteA beautiful flower but it kills all around it. There is a delicious darkness to this, Professor.
ReplyDeleteIs this actually a part of your operetta, Jeanne? I find this poem intoxicating! It is beautiful and yet it hints at the darkness I wanted people to strive for.
ReplyDeleteYou're such a talent!
Kat
You were following Kat's instructions years before she wrote them! I agree that it's a beautiful poem - it's makes me think of the evil queen in a fairy tale.
ReplyDeletePeter, dark but sad, too, don't you think?
ReplyDeleteKat, Thank you. Yes, I wrote this operetta as a re-write of the French medieval poem, Roman de la Rose. The original is 17,000 lines. Mine is only 30 pages.
Dana, Thank you! Yes, it could be an evil queen, but I wanted it to be a melancholy plea from Anne Sexton's spirit.
Your talent knows no bounds ... this is amazing!
ReplyDeleteI come to this knowing nothing of Rhododendrons but a bit of Anne Sexton, and I think she'd be pleased.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Helen, for your very kind words.
ReplyDeleteChris, Thank you. It would be grand if she were. Of the 'Beat' poets, I think Anne Sexton is up there with the best. Amazing how she arrived at the world of poetry by means of psychotherapy.
Awesome and powerful poem. Your imagery is breathtaking. Love it beauty and darkness.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
Thank you so much, Melanie! Have a lovely week!
ReplyDeleteThis is so good.
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Thank you so much, Anna. What a clever username you have!
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