This week's Poetry Jam has Mark Bagman and Butler as our guides, and the theme is Temptation! In my poetry stash, I discovered these two poetic statements which allude to the Adam and Eve story, so I thought they would be appropriate. They were written to bring awareness of feminine perspective, so prepare yourself.
Expression
Muck and mire:
Source of life
truest milk coagulates
to form original temptation.
Little men who have bitten
the fruit of the Tree
claim
it’s simply a rape,
blame
it on a few Voices of Eve.
Feminine sources
of life- soul- strife,
open your breasts
to express
the mellifluous flow
of Divinest Truth.
Jeanne I. Lakatos 2008
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Fallen Apple*
I am the fallen apple.
Ripe with ardor,
I drop from provisional support
and roll into fertile mire
of fecundity, ignominy.
Temptation.
Temptation.
I’ll not rot in isolation.
Jeanne I. Lakatos 2009
* You can read a post about this poem, iconic realism and hear Billie Holiday sing Strange Fruit on my other blog HERE.
Currently, I am covered with poison ivy literally from head to toe, so below is a quick haiku on what I am truly tempted to do right this minute:
Temptation brought on by Poison Ivy
incessant itching
I'll kill each wretched vine
or stay inside 'til autumn
Jeanne I. Lakatos 2011
Currently, I am covered with poison ivy literally from head to toe, so below is a quick haiku on what I am truly tempted to do right this minute:
Temptation brought on by Poison Ivy
incessant itching
I'll kill each wretched vine
or stay inside 'til autumn
Jeanne I. Lakatos 2011



These are brilliant!
ReplyDeleteSo loved these...
ReplyDelete"... I'll not rot in isolation." Wow!
Another "woman" theme... ha ah.
Thanks a million, Mama Zen and Margaret! Thank you for dropping by.
ReplyDeleteI remember that second poem. I would not want to get in that apple's way!
ReplyDeleteLOL Dana. Yeah, It's my fave! I wrote it after a series of hmmm... I'll put this lightly.... interesting events. Yep, that apple has chutzpah, for sure. ;)
ReplyDeleteI like that haiku ..I am trying the form myself.
ReplyDeleteAs to the apple and temptation, i love the title and these lines:
Fallen Apple*
I am the fallen apple.
Ripe with ardor,
wow you went everywhere with this one...i really like the first as it feels a call to action...that and i am trying to get rid of poison ivy right now...
ReplyDeleteExcellent words - very impressed.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
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Thank you, Heaven. Sometimes, I think in haiku! :) Yes, this Fallen Apple poem is one of my faves.
ReplyDeleteBrian, thanks. Yep, it was a definite call to action. Thank you for seeing that. Ugh! Between poison ivy and mosquito bites, I'm ready for Fall. Both are under control with me at this writing, though. Whew!
Thank you so much, Anna! I'll be visiting other sites as soon as I make a little more progress with my dissertation. Soon!