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04 August, 2011

Poetry Jam: Poems on Death (and beyond)

This week's Poetry Jam has Chris at The Enchanted Oak requesting that we write on the theme of death. I have chosen a narrative poem about the American Civil War since we have reached its 150th year anniversary.

  A nine-patch quilt, hand-quilted by me

Two Tiny, Nine-Patch Doll Quilts
A tiny, nine-patch doll quilt
lay upon a tiny bed
made especially for Maggie Mae
the year her family fled
from all those scornful Yankees,
who were running through their town
setting homes and lives afire
causing Southern hopes to drown.

A tiny, nine-patch doll quilt
lay upon a tiny crib
made especially for Ellie Sue
the summer when her nib
was loosened from her pen in hand
as the Rebels fired loud
and soon her family stood in fear
with the other Gettysburg crowd.

Two tiny, nine-patch doll quilts
heard two tiny prayers say,
“Dear Lord, please let our battled lands
be placed within Your peaceful stay,
and help our families change their hate
to blessings filled with love.
Then, all of us will recognize
Your blessings from above.”

Two tattered, nine-patch doll quilts
lie in honorable view
for each is cherished dearly
by descendents of the two
who saw their lives so clearly
pass through war’s destructive side
for one hundred years of prayer brought
a Rebel son his Yankee bride.

Jeanne I. Lakatos 

16 comments:

  1. What a great poem! I think this holds the seeds of a novel.

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  2. Is there ANYTHING you can't do?? Great storytelling, and I agree with Dana.

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  3. Thank you, Isabel!
    Thanks, Dana! hmmm... Now you have me thinking... I have been to Gettysburg so many times and lived in Atlanta, too. The spirits speak to me.
    Thank you, Karen. There are many things I can't do. One is to choose the winning Lotto numbers. :)

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  4. nice...i like this a lot...some fine story telling in there...i second the plea for a longer piece...

    i used to live 30 minutes south of gettysburg....

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  5. Thank you, Brian. Guess I'm going to explore this poem further. Hagerstown, by any chance?

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  6. Lovely quilt.. and nice story too~

    Sure, write it longer :-)

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  7. What a great idea, to tell the story from the viewpoint of the children's quilts. brilliant and also thought provoking. thank you!

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  8. Thank you, Debbie. This poem was inspired after I had viewed a small antique quilt, one made for a child's doll. I wondered what the child experienced and how that quilt ended up in the exhibit.

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  9. And she does quilts too! What a woman!

    Pete (Blogger acting up)

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  10. Easy there, Pete. btw, how's the weather there in Ireland?

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  11. That final line makes the whole thing sing. Don't you just love it when the Muse drops a gem like that in your lap?

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  12. Thanks, Chris. Yes, that generous Muse! :)

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  13. Fantastic! A future borne of conflict and hate but hopeful and loving.

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