This week's Poetry Jam prompt asks us to write a poem about medications.
Below is my haiku:
Photo: one of three Rose of Sharon bushes outside my front door
(One has white flowers, one pink, one white with pink center ring.)
(One has white flowers, one pink, one white with pink center ring.)
Wise medication
prescribed with dedication
illumination
Jeanne I. Lakatos 2011


Succint, powerful.
ReplyDeletei think there is a strong sense of relaxation here, too, beautifully unspoken.
ReplyDeletei think true moments of illumination are accompanied by a sensation of relaxation, now that i reflect on it after reading this. i really like this.
Let's hope our meds are always prescribed wisely, by dedicated professionals ...
ReplyDeleteWise haiku - bravo.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
I'm always in awe of people who master the art of haikus... Thank you for a beautiful share!
ReplyDeleteLaurie: Thank you.
ReplyDeleteEd: I agree and thank you.
Helen: Indeed!
Anna: Thank you!
cc: A 17 syllable poem is just about all I have time for these days...and thank you!
Brilliant rhyming Haiku!
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Thank you, Jack!
ReplyDeleteWise words but not so easy to find peace in this world. Sometimes people need a little help under Drs. advice. Nice words.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
Absolutely, Melanie. Thanks for dropping by!
ReplyDeletecute Haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Cello!
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