This week's Poetry Bus has the lovely Bug as its driver. Her challenge for us had three options. I chose the one about trees. This poem is actually a collection of my 'One Line Poem of the Day' entries from Facebook over the past two winters. They seemed to be calling me to assemble them here.
I took this photo last winter in Danbury, Connecticut.
A Day with a Wintry Tree
As morning sun
awakens each snowflake
adorning bare limbs,
and trees sigh
in serenity's brilliance,
one last, gold leaf glistens
in the snowy shower
when a brisk wind
draws its stem from a tree,
and in this release,
the leaf tumbles
in a dance of jubilation.
This leaf drifts to the ground,
and the tree,
now naked and sparkling
in the sun's warmth,
stands tall and ready
to accept its wintry destiny.
Golden sun illumines
the end of this day.
Behind striated clouds
of pink and orange,
an aqua sky enhances
the illumination
as dancing branches rattle,
yielding to the variant wind.
She breathes in the song
of this winter night
and surrenders to its peace,
lets the brisk, fresh air
fill her smile, for she sees
the tiny footprints of animals
braver than she,
leading to the tree's hollow.
Nurtured by the moon’s iridescence
and a dominion of love,
they snuggle
within a newly fallen leaf.
and a dominion of love,
they snuggle
within a newly fallen leaf.
Evergreens mingle
with snow-kissed branches.
The canopy opens
to welcome a thousand stars
spread across the midnight sky,
and under their distant radiance,
she whispers, “Humbly, I adore Thee.”
Jeanne I. Lakatos 2010



Gorgeous! I wish I could accept my wintry destiny so easily :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Dana. Great prompts this week! Hopefully, I'll be able to get around to all of the sites finally.
ReplyDeleteJeanne Iris, that is winter, wonderful. I love the pace, especially of the first two stanzas, that slows me to savour every word.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful work.
Mine was somewhat similar but yours went so much further. This is something very close to religion.
ReplyDelete'Humbly I adore thee' ... my favorite line from a poem that beautifully captures trees in winter.
ReplyDeleteLove the last stanza, and Pete is right. It has a real winter joy and christmassy feel to it too.
ReplyDeleteI love how the leaf, even in its demise, snuggles a family of small critters...to everything there is a purpose under the sun
ReplyDeleteI also love the image of joyfully viewing the thousand stars...reminds me of looking up at night in the backwoods of Maine last summer. No city lights. Stunning.
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ReplyDeleteI remember a hymn that started, "Humbly, we adore Thee" (I can hear my father's voice singing it).
ReplyDeleteThis line for me: "to accept its wintry destiny".
One of your finest, Jeanne Iris.
Kat
Titus: Thank you for your kind words.
ReplyDeletePeter: Thank you! I'll get over to read yours as soon as I finish grading these papers.
Helen: 'Humbly We Adore Thee' is a hymn that became an earworm one day, so I had to incorporate it into a poem.
Peadar: Thank you! I wasn't thinking about Christmas when I assembled these 'One Line Poems...' but now that you mention it, you're right!
SLM: Welcome and Thank you! Leaves and stars have a magical significance, don't they?
Kat: Thank you! Yes, you're right about the hymn.
I enjoy the passage of time in your poem, Jeanne, with the journey of the last gold leaf and the trees welcoming a thousand stars.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Chris. I'm elated to see that you read the magic in this.
ReplyDeleteI love the way one is drawn in to appreciate the treasure within this poem. Very strong.
ReplyDeleteVery serene and composed.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Socks! I truly appreciate your kind words.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Lucy! And thank you for dropping by.
Love it! Your leaf is far more willing to let go and fulfill her destiny! Brave!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Muse! Indeed, such a brave little leaf! ; )
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