I had to remove the photo of the June Bug. It just gave me the creeps.
Word bank: laundry, laugh, edges, ghost, beer
Attack of the Georgia June Bugs
Snugly against my right hip,
I carry laundry, clean and folded,
in a wicker basket
on a hot, southern night.
Georgia June bugs
circle above my head.
Diving to and fro, their wings roar
like ghosts of B-52 bombers.
I run to escape their clicking laughs;
laundry jostles
over the edges of the basket.
I swoop down quickly
to retrieve escaping bras and panties
before anyone sees me
or those bugs get nearer.
“Don’t you dare fly into my hair!”
Ah, at last, I’m inside my apartment.
Only one goal: to chug a cold beer.
Jeanne I. Lakatos 2011


Well done!!! Very impressive, your poem AND the June Bugs description. (I lived in the Atlanta for one year.)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Helen. One year is long enough to be acquainted with those bugs. Oh yes!
ReplyDeleteOh, thank God for the beer!
ReplyDeleteso well put together...I wish I knew what june bugs are? Great!
ReplyDeleteThat made me smile - poor Jeanne!
ReplyDeletehonest and magical.
ReplyDeleteOf course.. escape from the bugs and the heat.. and have a beer ~
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this ~
Chris: Amen to that!
ReplyDeleteGerry: I placed a photo up just for you!
Dana: Glad to bring up your gorgeous smile.
Cuckoo Clock: Thank you!
Heaven: Thank you. Yes indeed a great escape!
My sister lives in Canton Georgia. I know well the buggers. Wonderful use of the prompt words. Loved this.
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Canton, Georgia! Small world indeed! Yep, those big buggers are all over the Peach State. (I'm glad the one above us is stuck in that photo square, though.) Thank you, Melanie.
ReplyDeleteLove the image of the B52s. They sound adorable little critturs...
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